I am learning to add detail to my writing.
Sally the Whale
One
day there was a whale called Sally. Sally had friends. There was Lily and
Hannah. They were her friends.
I am getting better at telling Mrs Mason more in my writing. It is easy when it is something I love to write about like the whales.
1 comment:
Good try at adding detail to your story. We will keep working on it together!
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